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Almost, but not quite

Title: Almost, but not quite

Rating: G
Summary: It was supposed to be so simple. Walk up the aisle and say your "i do's" and then you'd have him for the rest of your life, right? That was how things were supposed to be...

""Will you, Cho Kyuhyun, accept Lee Sungmin as your lawfully wedded spouse, through laughter and tears, sickness and health, richer or poorer, till death do you part?"

"I do."

Sungmins breath hitches as he feels the cold metal touch the skin of his ring finger. He doesn't look at the ring though. His eyes are focused at the dull black eyes of the person standing across from him, and the other smiles tenderly when the ring was finally in place.

"And do you, Lee Sungmin, accept Cho Kyuhyun as your lawfully wedded spouse, through laughter and tears, sickness and health, richer or poorer, till death do you part?"

He opens his mouth to answer, but the breath catches in his throat and he has to swallow to clear his passageways. His forehead breaks out in cold sweat.

"I-I do." he finally manages to breath out, and Kyuhyun's eyebrows are scrunched together and he reaches out a hand to touch Sungmin but the elder takes his hand instead and slips the ring on it with shaky fingers. He smiles up at Kyuhyun in triumph and the taller of the two also let's out a small smile.

"Then i pronounce you, Man and spouse."

There was a quiet smattering of applause from those present, which wasn't much since there were only four people there: a red-nosed Eunhyuk, a solemn Siwon, a drunk Ryeowook and a blubbering Eeteuk. Of all of them, it was only Siwon who had clapped properly.

"Do you want to-" Kyuhyun asks him, and his hands come up to caress Sungmins face and he does his best to not flinch and gives the younger man s small nod.


And then Kyuhyun is drawing closer to his face with an unsure expression and Sungmin closes his eyes as he feels the other mans hot breath ghost over his lips, and then the heat becomes more real as their lips touch and Sungmin tries to kiss back but then his knees go weak and they buckle under his weight. He falls against Kyuhyun and the other struggles to support him with his arms but the action is too sudden and he fails and they both fall to the ground as their guests jump to their feet in alarm and run up the aisle to assist them.

Sungmins eyes spring open.

"I'm sorry." Kyuhyun whispers in his ear, and Sungmin shivers as he feels something wet fall on his shoulders exposed skin.

He looks up to find tears pouring down Kyuhyuns cheeks and a flurry of other faces and voices panicking around them.

"Don't cry." he croaks as he smiles reassuringly, and he reaches out a hand to wipe the tears from Kyuhyuns face but he never quite makes it and the next thing he knows he's gasping for breath and the screams around him get louder and Kyuhyun is trembling as he cries even as he supported him in his arms.



A/N: this isn't finished, and i don't think i ever will finish it, :p the inspiration just ran out and i forgot what this was supposed to be about, hmmm, i think it had something to do with chronic diseases


( 4 comments — Leave a comment )
Nov. 21st, 2010 02:36 am (UTC)
omo this is really good!
;A; so sad~
it'll be really interesting if you did complete it~
Feb. 4th, 2011 05:30 pm (UTC)
awww sweetie you should have completed this... its actually quite good... hope you finish it. hwaiting! ^^,
Feb. 5th, 2011 10:09 am (UTC)
Thank you for commenting bb! <3

I'll try to finish it dear, but I'm not really sure where to take it, any ideas? A prompt or smthn?
Oct. 3rd, 2013 05:23 am (UTC)
Cries along with kyuhyun...
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