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[fanfic] in the rain

Title: in the rain
Pairing: broken!KyuMin, EunMin, implied!QMi
Rating: PG-15
Genre: angst, romance, humor
Series: Of kisses, maknaes and turtles
Drabble: 3/?
Summary: Min never knew that love would hurt this much.

I never expected that love would hurt this much, that HE would hurt me this much

The sound of my sneakers against wet gravel is all that I hear as I run, that, and the frantic beating of my heart. If it were up to me, I'd be at the opposite end of the world right now, as far away from him as possible. I feel like I'd rather be dead, that way I would never feel pain again. But then I stop and think that maybe I'm just overreacting, maybe I'm just being too possessive, maybe they weren't really kissing, but then, I remember that today is supposed to be our anniversary, we should be together, not "them", and I begin crying even harder.

I'm drenched to the bone because the rain has been pouring, but it doesn't even matter. It's a blessing really, because it hides my tears from the world. I stop running because my shoulders are shaking too much and I can't control my sobs even as I tell myself that it's not worth it, he's not worth the tears, And then suddenly, I can't feel the rain hitting me anymore and I look up and see Eunhyuk looking at me in concern as he held an umbrella over our heads.

"Are you alright Sungmin?" he asks and I could only whimper in response because my throat doesn't seem to work anymore and he wraps his arms around me even when it got him wet too and tells me that everything okay, it was alright, he was here and I would only cry harder and I'd fist my hands in his shirt and I'd sob into his neck.

We'd stand there in the rain like that, with one of Eunhyuk's hand holding the umbrella up even when both of us were already wet and the other one awkwardly patting my head and I clung to him as if he was my lifeline. He'd continue whispering words of comfort in my ear and i'd find myself nodding to them as I sniffled even though I didn't agree. And soon the rain would stop falling and he'd continue holding the umbrella up because he wouldn't remove the arm he had around me and I'd still have my face buried in his neck.

Then, without any warning, I'd suddenly lift my head and crush my lips against his because I'd be thinking how unfair it was that Kyuhyun could go about kissing whoever he likes. If he can do that, why can't I? And for a moment, I enjoy how wonderfully soft and full EUnhyuks lips are and I hear the clatter of an umbrella as it is dropped and forgotten but neither of us cares. I'd feel his fingers threading though my hair and his other hand tighten around my waist and I'd tilt my head and close my eyes as Eunhyuk ventures his tongue out and tastes my lips and I open up for him and he deepens the kiss. It seemed like my brain had suddenly stopped functioning anymore and all of me was centered on this one kiss but then Donghae's smiling face flashes into my mind and I break away, panting and with the distinct taste of Eunhyuk and rain on my lips.

"I'm sorry..." I say and I refuse to look at him because I'm too afraid to see what his reaction would be.

"Just...just forget that this happened."

And then i turn around and run away.

Comments

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princess_jaded
May. 10th, 2010 08:37 am (UTC)
I'll admit something here, I was very put off by the fact that this is broken!kyumin and you're using a pro-kyumin icon. And while I still am, and the length of the chapters are really short - it's good writing.

I thoroughly hate Zhoumi here and I hope he gets hit by a car, but I'm really looking forward to what you come up with next.
taichick
Jul. 15th, 2010 11:43 am (UTC)
thank you for reading!

about the userpic thingie, well, at that time that was my only userpic. Sorry, newbie here. ^^

It's my BFF Kisung who uploads userpics for this account.



elfrulezforever
May. 10th, 2010 02:18 pm (UTC)
i always hated the pairing qmi but then i hope eunmin exist too
shiro_yuuki
Jul. 25th, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
*tug on your shirt* I want moreeeeee *puppy eyes*
bleushin
Aug. 4th, 2010 02:54 am (UTC)
Sungmin still thinks about Donghae =)
I am waiting for more :)
minto85
Oct. 7th, 2010 11:01 am (UTC)
Nooo!! Please write moree ='(
Don't tell me you stopped wrtiing the fic ='(
I don't want it to be finished before KyuMin is healed~!! *whines*
Hope you'll update it sometime even thought it's from months ago...
shimrayoung
Nov. 18th, 2010 12:13 am (UTC)
Soo............
Is everybody going to cheated on each other...?
Damn, this is so wrong....I feel sad. =((
So, am I obliged to scold you too, Minnie ?
Aigoo... poor thing...it wasnt the reatest choice in earth. >_<;;;
This might go worser....O_O
reishicolleen
Mar. 9th, 2011 03:45 pm (UTC)
OMG JEN WHYARE YOU NOT CONTINUING THISSSSSS???

T_T

YOU MUST~~~
OMG MIMI, YOU ARE A RAY OF SUNSHINE, NOT SOMEONE WHO I WANT TO SHOOT RIGHT ABOUT NOT
taichick
Mar. 9th, 2011 04:16 pm (UTC)
waaaa, lack of inspiration i guess,
Give me inspiration? /blinks hopefully

reishicolleen
Mar. 11th, 2011 02:00 am (UTC)
I CAN GIVE A FEW~ XD
I HAVE A PLOT LIKE THIS BEFORE,M BUT I THINK ITS CLICHE~ X_X
taichick
Mar. 11th, 2011 05:46 am (UTC)
I'll accept anything at this point! XD
You do? Show me show me!
:3
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